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Friday, 5 May 2017

a poor shot

Title-A poor shot

What could a new title be? A magic stone
Orientation
WHO?William,2 younger brothers,the king,the old man

WHEN?in the daytime

WHERE?in the woods and the castle

Events!William tried and tried but he still couldn't do it so he made practice target where he could practice
but he still couldn't do it.

Problem?William couldn't shoot his arrow when they went hunting and his brothers laughed and laughed.

He kept on trying and trying and trying but he couldn't       

       do it so he gave up and started walking to the castle.
William was having a walk in the forest
        For hour then he started walking back
A minute after an old man jumped out from a bush he looked old and had one
tooth

Resolution William was in the woods taking a walk then he came across a old man he looked hungry and cold so he gave a coat and some food then the old man pulled out a stone and gave it to him

Resolution William was in the woods taking a walk then he came across a old man he looked hungry and cold so he gave a coat and some food then the old man pulled out a stone and gave it to him

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