Title-the goose with the golden eggs
What could a new title be?A goose with yellow and shiny eggs
Orientation
WHO?the farmer and the goose
WHEN?in the daytime
WHERE?the farm
Problem?the farmer wanted to be rich and he got greedy.
Events!One day a farmer found a yellow egg he was about to throw in away but when he took it inside
He realised that it was made out of gold!!!
The next day the farmer sold the egg and he got a lot
Of money so kept on selling the eggs and he got richer and richer and richer until he got 100 dollars.
The next day the man sold hundreds of eggs
and he got richer and richer and richer until he got greedy.
Then the next day the man grew greedy and rich but then he wanted more and more and more gold.
Resolution the man wanted to get all the gold so one morning the farmer sneaked up to the goose and with his knife he killed the goose.
Ending But when the farmer cut the goose open but he was disappointed that there was no gold and then grew poor and poor and poor.
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