LI: to create a poetic poem.
For the second task of the second day we had to create a poem about what it would be like to walk on the moon. For the haiku I had to list about 10 words. My poem was a haiku and it was called one step for man.
Hi Lukah, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like haiku poem you created - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon, I think it would be a bit strange personally!!! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Kia Ora Lukah!, What a great Haiku poem you have about Neil Armstrong. Your background of your DLO caught my attention. I like how you included how Neil Armstrong felt when he stepped on the moon. If you had the chance, would you walk on the moon?
Kia Ora Lukah! I liked reading your Haiku about Neil Armstrong. I like how you used a site to help you with the poem as it can be hard sometimes. Blog you later! ~ Florence
Hi Lukah, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like haiku poem you created - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon, I think it would be a bit strange personally!!! Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lukah!,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great Haiku poem you have about Neil Armstrong. Your background of your DLO caught my attention. I like how you included how Neil Armstrong felt when he stepped on the moon. If you had the chance, would you walk on the moon?
Keep It Up!
Kia Ora Lukah!
ReplyDeleteI liked reading your Haiku about Neil Armstrong. I like how you used a site to help you with the poem as it can be hard sometimes.
Blog you later!
~ Florence